We've had scenes so far featuring Magadon, then Cale and Riven, then Abelar, so why not one of the Shadovar. Here's Brennus, perhaps not getting what he expected. This scene will have particular meaning for those of you who've read
Continuum, from Realms of War
Hope you enjoy.
Brennus put his mother’s necklace in an inner pocket, near his heart. A sudden sensory memory struck him—the smell of her dark hair. The shadows around him swirled. He recalled her laughter, the crisp, unrestrained sound of it. . .
“Home now?” his homunculi said in unison, bringing him back to himself.
“Yes,” Brennus said. He pulled the darkness around him, pictured in his mind the circular divination chamber in his manse on Shade Enclave, and rode the shadows there.
He smiled when he felt the air change. Unlike the moist air of Selgaunt, rich with the tang of the sea, the cool air of the enclave bore the dense, aggressive aridity of the great desert over which the city flew, though it wouldn’t be a desert for much longer.
Ephemeral ribbons of shadow formed and dissolved in the murk, the welcome tenebrous air of home. A domed ceiling of dusky quartz soared over the circular chamber in which Brennus performed his most challenging divinations. Dim stars peered down through the quartz, diffident pinpoints of light that barely penetrated the haze.
“Home,” his homunculi said, their voices gleeful. They leaped from their shoulder perches and pelted across the polished floor of the chamber, sniffing at the floor and occasionally squealing with delight.
“Mouse turd,” one of them said, holding a tiny mouse pellet aloft like a trophy.
Brennus smiled and shook his head at their foolishness. He intoned the words to a sending spell and transmitted a message to his seneschal, Lhaaril.
I am returned to Shade Enclave for a short time to work my Art. In four hours I will take a meal.
Lhaaril returned, I will have it prepared. Welcome home, Prince Brennus.
Brennus gave the homunculi some time to frolic then walked to the center of the scrying chamber where stood a cube of tarnished silver, half again as tall as a man and positioned to take advantage of the invisible lines of magical force that veined the world. His homunculi, having completed their olfactory reunion with their home, climbed his robes and resumed their normal place atop his shoulders.
He held an open palm before one of the cube’s faces. His homunculi mimicked his movement, giggling. Shadows extended from his hand and brushed the cube. At their touch the silvery face took on depth. Black tarnish swirled slowly on its surface, a cloudy ocean of molten metal.
When the cube fully activated, Brennus began his inquiry. He cast one divination after another, scoured the past and the present, and the entire face of Faerûn. Shadows and sweat leaked from his flesh. He worked in silence and his homunculi soon grew bored and fell asleep on their perches, bookending his ears. Their snores did not affect his concentration.
Despite the comprehensiveness of his magic, Brennus’s spells resulted mostly in frustration. He learned nothing of Varra; she remained . . . absent. And he learned nothing of Erevis Cale, his activities or location. The power that warded him allowed him to slip the grasp of any attempted divination. Brennus suspected that Mask himself might cloak Cale.
Brennus did learn of the world from which Kesson Rel hailed, a cold plane of which Brennus’s most powerful spells revealed little more than a name—Ephyras—and the promise of darkness as deep as the void. He pulled back before pushing his spells further. The hole felt too deep. He feared to fall into it.
He turned his spells back to Faerûn and another series of divinations showed the swirling darkness of the Shadowstorm as it roiled across Sembia, deforming and transforming the life with which it came into contact. It grew in strength as it expanded. The currents of negative energy swirling invisibly in its midst could drain the life from a man in a matter of hours.
Within the storm, Brennus saw the ever growing army of shadows, their numbers legion. He saw the regiments of towering, pallid, shadow giants clad in gray armor and darkness, saw the spire of Kesson Rel’s otherworldly abode hovering like an executioner’s blade over the twisted, shadow-haunted ruins of Ordulin, and saw in the tortured sky a slowly turning maelstrom of shadow and dull viridian light, the rictus of the planar rift vomiting up the corrupting darkness of the Plane of Shadow. Repeated lightning strokes flashed between the clouds and the spire. The sight of it made Brennus dizzy. His homunculi stirred uneasily in their sleep, and one waved a hand before its face as if to shoo away a pest.
Brennus resisted the urge to turn the eye of his divinations to the interior of the spire. He didn’t want to alert Kesson Rel to his spying, lest Kesson redouble his wards. Still, he heard Kesson’s name in the dull thunder that rumbled within the Shadowstorm, and felt like an ache in his teeth Kesson’s immense power, even through the scrying cube. Brennus knew that Kesson Rel was no longer a man. He was semi-divine, a godling, and what the Shadovar intended to conquer and use, Kesson intended to pervert and destroy.
Brennus watched for a short time longer then deactivated the cube. Sweat soaked him. His body ached. Fatigue dulled his mind. But he needed to know more. He knew that Kesson’s divine nature would make killing him problematic.
Brennus occasionally relied on powerful extraplanar entities to assist his inquiries, immortal creatures whose knowledge and understanding sometimes exceeded even Brennus’s. He would have to rely on such assistance again were he to be of assistance to his brother. Knowledge floated on strange currents in the lower planes, and powerful devils sometimes learned important snippets of information about gods and men. Such information was as much the currency of the Nine Hells and the Abyss as were mortal souls.
He strode to the far corner of the room where a large triangle surrounded by a circle had been inlaid with lead into the floor. His movement awakened his homunculi. They yawned, smacked their lips, noticed the thaumaturgic triangle, and sat up straight.
“Devil!” they said, and clapped with glee.
“Retrieve candles,” Brennus said, and they jumped off his shoulders to perform their task.
In moments they returned with wrist-thick candles. Streaks of crimson spiraled around the otherwise ivory-colored shafts of the tapers. Brennus placed them so that their bases exactly straddled the three points where the triangle touched the circle that enveloped it. He backed away, lit them with a command word, and they birthed blue flames.
He cleared his mind and intoned the words to the summoning that would bring forth one of the most powerful devils in the Nine Hells, a fiend of the pit.
After the first stanza, the room grew cool His homunculi shivered and tried to wrap themselves in the loose folds of his cloak, chuckling nervously at the clouds their breathing formed. Ice rimed the lines of the thaumaturgic triangle. The blue flames burned steadily.
After the second and third stanzas, the air grew cold and a point of red light, a hole into the Nine Hells, formed in the air above the center of the summoning triangle. First groans then screams leaked through the hole, a tunnel that ended in a realm of suffering.
Shadows poured from Brennus as he voiced the words to the conjuration. Power coalesced in the room and concentrated in the air between his upraised hands and the summoning triangle. The air became frigid and frost formed on his fingers and palms, the cold like the bite of sharp teeth. He let nothing disturb his recitation of the arcane couplets.
After the fourth stanza the power of the spell peaked and Brennus pronounced the name of the devil he wished to draw forth.
“Baziel, come!”
The mention of the pit fiend’s name concentrated the arcane power, gave it voice, and his call went forth into the Hells.
In answer, a cyclone of coruscating fire formed in the space over the summoning triangle. Darkness gathered in the core of the flames, a black seed of evil that began to expand into a doorway between worlds. The flames whirled around it, flared.. Smoke churned above the circle and mixed with the shadowy air, obscuring his vision. The smell of brimstone polluted the room and Brennus thought something had gone awry.
A form materialized in the doorway amidst the smoke and flame, and slowly took on definition, features. Brennus recognized the towering, muscular, red-skinned frame and membranous black wings of a pit fiend. He ended his summoning with the final words of binding.
“You are called, Baziel and you are bound to answer my . . .”
The devil stepped through the doorway and into the triangle and Brennus’s voice died. The fiend’s face resolved not into the bestial, horned visage of Baziel, but into a handsome mien that could have been human but for the black horns that jutted from the brow, but for the pupiless white eyes that stared out of the cavernous sockets and pinioned Brennus to the floor of the chamber.
Brennus recognized the fiend—the archfiend—immediately. Shadows whirled around Brennus, the physical manifestation of the jumble in his mind. The archfiend gazed around the room with only mild interest. He seemed to take up too much space, to be too heavy for the floor, too real, too present.
The homunculi lost their stomach for the summoning.
“Wrong devil!” they squealed, and darted into the folds of Brennus’s cloak, trembling with fear.
Brennus struggled to hold his ground under the weight of the fiend’s gaze. He licked his lips, fought for calm, and called to mind the various defensive spells at his disposal.
None of them would be of any use. The archfiend was beyond him. His father, with assistance perhaps, could match the fiend on the Prime Material Plane, but no other in Shade Enclave.
Only the binding circle and the constraints of the conjuration protected Brennus from soul death. Or so he hoped.
Mephistopheles showed fangs in a smile, as if reading Brennus’s mind. His voice, deeper even than Rivalen’s, resonated with power ancient even by Shadovar standards.
“What a pleasant locale,” the archfiend said. With his clawed forefinger, he pulled a tendril of diaphanous shadow from the air, spun it around his finger, watched it dissolve. “Shadows seem to be my lot in these days.”
Brennus cleared his throat. “The summoning called Baziel.”
He realized the stupidity of the words only after they exited his mouth.
“Baziel is in service to me, now, and resides in my court at Mephistar.”
“I . . . was not aware of that, Lord of Cania. It was not so when last I summoned him.”
The archfiend’s features hardened, and when they did they reminded Brennus of someone, though he could not draw forth the name.
“You should have inquired, shadeling. By summoning him, you have offended me. I am here to receive your apology.”
Two thousand years of co-rule in Shade Enclave rendered Brennus unused to demands. He held the archfiend’s gaze with difficulty.
“I intended no offense, Lord of the Eighth.” He waved a hand and released the binding. “You are released.”
He expected Mephistopheles to dissipate, return to Cania. Instead, the archfiend remained before him, towering, solid, threatening.
“You are dismissed,” Brennus said, and put power into his voice.
The archfiend drew in his wings. “I do not wish to leave. There are matters we should discuss.”
The homunculi squeaked and tried to burrow farther into Brennus’s cloak. Despite his trepidation, Brennus was intrigued by the archfiend’s words.
“You wish—”
Words failed him as Mephistopheles reached through the magical field that encapsulated the summoning triangle and binding circle. The magic flared a feeble orange as the archfiend broke through, the whole of Brennus’s binding mere cobwebs to the archfiend’s power.
“First, apologize,” Mephistopheles said.
Brennus backed up a step, activated the communication ring on his finger. His heart slammed against his ribs. The shadows in the room darkened, churned.
Rivalen, I am in my summoning chamber in the enclave. Attend me with the Most High. I have—
“Your ring is not functioning,” Mephistopheles said. He picked up one of the candles from the thaumaturgic triangle, and snuffed the flame with thumb and forefinger. “Apologize.”
Brennus retreated another step, drew the shadows around him, and prepared to ride them to the mansion of the Most High where he would get aid to face the archfiend.
“Your spells will not serve you either, nor your powers over darkness,” the archfiend said, his voice rising. He extended his wings, and dark power, deeper and blacker than shadows, haloed his form.
“Apologize!”
The power in the archfiend’s voice shook the manse, cracked the quartz roof of the summoning chamber, and dusted Brennus and the entire room in ice.
“My apologies, Mephistopheles,” Brennus said, the humiliating words bitter on his tongue. He refused to bow, even halfway. “I intended you no offense. I merely wished to question Baziel on certain matters beyond my Art to answer alone.”
Power retreated back into the archfiend’s form and his voice returned to normal. He seemed to shrink, to shed some of the threat implicit in his mere existence.
“We understand one another now.” He smiled and inclined his head. “I accept your apology, Prince of Shade. And the matters about which you wished to query Baziel are the matters that I wish us to discuss. Kesson Rel?”
Brennus looked up, his mind racing. He knew all fiends to be liars. If Mephistopheles wished to answer Brennus’s questions, it was because his answer, whether true or false, served the archfiend’s purpose. What stake did Mephistopheles have in matters in Sembia?
“Why make this offer?”
“It amuses me to see you correctly informed.”
Brennus bluffed. “I have no questions.”
Mephistopheles smiled. “You lie poorly.”
The shadows around Brennus swirled.
“You bear an interesting trinket,” the archfiend said, and nodded at Brennus’s chest.
It took Brennus a moment to process the conversational detour. The archfiend meant his mother’s necklace. He tried to keep eagerness from his tone. The necklace suddenly felt warm against his flesh. He could feel his heart pounding against it.
“You know something of it?”
“Now you have questions?”
“Do you?”
Mephistopheles made a dismissive gesture. “Perhaps.”
Brennus took a step toward the summoning circle, the whiff of a revelation drawing him forward.
“Who murdered my mother?”
“Kesson Rel.”
Brennus stopped short. “Kesson Rel?”
“We were discussing Kesson Rel.”
Brennus shook his head. “No, no. We were discussing my mother.”
“Were we?”
“Yes. Yes. Tell me about my mother!”
Mephistopheles crossed his muscular arms across his chest. “No. First things first.”
Brennus realized he was breathing rapidly. The shadows around him whirled and spun.
“Kesson Rel,” he said.
The archfiend nodded. “Continue.”
“We want him dead.”
“He is powerful, infused with the power of a god.”
“A god? Not a goddess?”
Mephistopheles smiled. “Kesson Rel stole his power from the Shadowlord. Shar lays claims to it, now. Of course, how the Shadowlord came by it is . . . another tale.”
Brennus processed the new information, and would ponder its implications later. He looked up at the crack in the quartz ceiling, at the dusting of ice that still rimed the room, back at the fiend. “Can it be done? Can Kesson Rel be killed?”
The archfiend beat his wings, once, stirring a breeze that smelled of corpses. “Everything dies. Even worlds.”
Brennus did not understand that last. “How then, if he is as powerful as you say?”
Irritation wrinkled Mephistopheles’s high brow, narrowed the orbs of his eyes.
“Because his power is not his own. He came by it as all faithless thieves do. By stealing it. He thinks to have locked it away, but the key yet remains. You will find it in Ephyras.”
“The world from which he came?”
The fiend nodded. Smoke issued from his nostrils.
Brennus considered the information. “You want him dead, too, else you would not have come. Why?”
The archfiend’s face was expressionless. “To collect a debt.”
Brennus knew he would get nothing more. “Tell me how to do it. Then tell me of my mother.”
Mephistopheles chuckled. “I will tell you one or the other. How to kill Kesson Rel or the identity of your mother’s murderer. Which will you have answered?”
Brennus swallowed his anger, his frustration, struggled, and finally said, “Tell me how to kill Kesson Rel.”
The archfiend smiled, and began to speak.
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July 23 2008, 18:27:56 UTC 3 years ago
We do appreciate you sharing with us.
July 23 2008, 19:23:13 UTC 3 years ago
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July 23 2008, 20:51:53 UTC 3 years ago
Your addicts are pleased... for now.
July 31 2008, 23:02:11 UTC 3 years ago
just kidding ya. looking forward to putting the pieces together in May, Paul!
July 24 2008, 03:22:51 UTC 3 years ago
Thank You Paul
I just wanted to say thank you for this snippet of your writing. It is a good end to a long day and I am savoring it like the glass of Glenlivet I was just sipping.My wife and I just had a memorial service for the baby boy we were about to adopt. He passed away two weeks ago in Ethiopia. Things like this put life in a new perspective and let you both worry less about trivial things and appreciate some of the finer things in life a bit more keenly.
My two biological children, my wife, good friends and supportive family are things I thank God for and realize I can't take for granted and must savor with every moment. Simple pleasures like my scotch and your writing allow me to take a break from trying to understand the logic of a baby's passing and appreciate the talents that we're given. Thanks for the snippet of your next novel - as always I enjoy your writing and it gives me a great escape which is particularly needed now.
-Andrew
July 24 2008, 04:59:53 UTC 3 years ago
Thank you sir!
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July 27 2008, 08:45:52 UTC 3 years ago
The blue or the red pill
Ye know, I'm pulling my hair right now because Brennus didn't choose to know the identity of his mother's murderer. *sigh* Why, why why didn't he?*howls in frustration*
All the same, thanks for the snippet. Can't wait til I have the book in my hands.
-Mordrayn-
July 29 2008, 03:43:32 UTC 3 years ago
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August 7 2008, 17:47:42 UTC 3 years ago
Wanda
Mr. Kemp you are definately one of my favorite fantasy authors, at-edge-of-my-seat plot shifts, very realistic characters. I love it. I read all your novels this past month, and the Sojourner character's almost child-like motive for all of that chaos and destruction was at once touching and disturbing. Great work!A funny thought: For some reason this excerpt above reminds me of that scene in the movie - "A Fish Called Wanda" where Otto (Kevin Kline) tries to "persuade" John Cleese's character to apologize repeatedly (with him subsequently dangling Cleese out or the window).