paulskemp ([info]paulskemp) wrote,

Second Shadowrealm Snippet

I think I'll try to post a snippet each month from now until Shadowrealm's release, just to give a flavor.  As always, this is not copyedited prose.  Typos are mine all mine.

Here's a scene featuring our favorite fallen paladin, Abelar Corrinthal.  I hope you enjoy. 

 As they started off, Abelar said to Regg, “If matters become dire, I want you and the company to double up with as many of the women and children as possible and go ahead. Without the wagons to slow them, the horses will outrun the storm.”

            
“You speak as if you would not come.”

            
“I wouldn’t. But I would want you to take Elden.”

            
“You ask me to do something you would not?” Regg smiled, and thumped Abelar on the shoulder. “You know I cannot do that. None of us can. None of us will. We will find another way or we will give our horses to the refugees. They can ride in twos. That gets more than four hundred to safety.”

           
They cannot be left unguarded.”

            
“Then a small force will accompany them. But I think we will have to draw lots to determine who leaves. None of the company will want a spot in a saddle better filled by a refugee. You know this. You made us, Abelar.”

            
Abelar nodded.

            
“The light is in you, Abelar. Rose or no rose. I see it.”

            
Abelar looked off into the rain. He did not feel the presence of his god in his soul but he did feel something akin to it. The sensation puzzled him.

            
“What is that?” Regg said, squinting into the rain.

            
Abelar followed his friend’s gaze into the southern sky. The rain and twilight reduced visibility, but he saw what had caught Regg’s eye. At first he thought it a cloud, but that could not be.

            
“It moves against the wind.”

            
“Aye,” said Regg, pulling Firstlight to a stop.

            
Abelar did the same with Swiftdawn and studied the sky.

            
Behind them, the caravan slowed, then stopped. Above the patter of rain, above the constant low roll of thunder, Abelar heard the murmur of questions turn to cries of dismay.

            
The object continued to close, looming larger, darker.

            
“It is immense,” said Regg.

            
“Get Trewe to sound the muster and form up.”

            
Regg spun Firstlight and rode back into the caravan. The clarion of Trewe’s trumpet sounded. The company began to assemble around Abelar and all eyes watched the sky.

            
A floating, inverted mountaintop closed the distance. A pall of shadows enshrouded it, leaked from it like fog. Hints of buildings—towers and spires—poked here and there from the swirling darkness. Winged forms wheeled awkwardly about its craggy, conical bottom. Abelar marveled at the power that must have been needed to keep an entire city afloat.

            
“Shadovar,” he said, as much puzzled as alarmed.

            
The caravan huddled in the plains, exposed, caught between a Shadovar city before and the Shadowstorm behind.

            
The city stopped a few bowshots distant, on the other side of the Mudslide.

            
“They are near the Stonebridge,” Regg said.

            
Abelar nodded. The Stonebridge provided the only means of crossing the Mudslide for leagues.

            
The rain continued. Eyes moved back and forth from the Shadowstorm to the Shadovar city. The tension thickened. The city hovered ominously in the air, hovered ominously in their future, a lesion on the sky.

            
“What do they want?” someone shouted from the caravan.

            
“We cannot just remain here,” shouted another.

            
“If they meant us well, we would have heard already,” Regg said. “Let us go knock on their door.”

            
“I won’t leave Elden,” Abelar said, and felt Regg’s gaze on him.

            
“Then we wait a while longer,” Regg said softly. “After that, I will take a party forward.”

            
The sun sank low on the horizon and night crept over the plains.

            
Regg turned to the company. “I want twenty swords to ride forward to the city. Volunteers?”

            
Most everyone in the company indicated a willingness and Regg started ticking off names.

            
As he did, the darkness ten paces before them started to swirl and deepen. Abelar grabbed his friend by the bicep and turned him around.

            
“Regg.”

            
Swords rang from scabbards. Shields were unslung. The soft sound of spell casting carried through the rain, Roen asking for Lathander’s blessing.

            
The darkness expanded and eight or nine score Shadovar warriors materialized from the darkness. They wore archaic black plate armor that featured points, studs, and spikes in abundance. Their large, oval shields, enameled in black, showed no heraldry and looked like holes. Helms with nose guards obscured most of their faces, but the gray skin Abelar could see reminded him of a corpse. They bore bare swords in their fists, the blades made of black crystal. Shadows leaked from all of them. They seemed part of the darkness.

            
“Shades,” Abelar said. Like Erevis Cale.

            
Leather creaked. Horses whinnied. The two forces regarded each other across the grass, the rain thudding off of armor.

            
One of the Shadovar took a step forward and in that single stride moved from the darkness in which he stood to within a few paces before Abelar and Regg. Firstlight and Swiftdawn did not buck. Abelar and Regg did not start.

            
The Shadovar removed his helm to reveal a bald head and black eyes.

            
“By order of the Hulorn, ruler of Sembia, you are prohibited from crossing the Mudslide River.”

            
A rustle went through the company, the murmur of anger. It took a few moments for Abelar to reconcile the words with reality.

            
“The Hulorn does not rule these lands,” Regg said. “His power extends to Selgaunt and its environs. No farther.”

            
“You are mistaken,” said the Shadovar.

            
“The Hulorn and Selgaunt are allies of Saerb,” Abelar said.

            
“If it were otherwise,” the Shadovar said, “you would all be dead already.”

            
Regg spurred Firstlight toward the Shadovar. Abelar stopped him with an arm across his chest.

            
Regg said, “You should hope your blade is as sharp as your tongue, shade. Should it come to that.”

            
The Shadovar did not take his gaze from Abelar. “Matters are as I have stated. You will not be allowed to cross the Mudslide. Go back. Stay. Neither is of any moment to me. We will prevent with force any attempt to cross the Stonebridge or otherwise ford the river.”

            
The company murmured angrily.

            
“Force?”

            
“Prevent?”

            
Horses inched forward. The tone grew uglier than the weather.

            
Shouts carried to them from the caravan.

            
“What does he say?”

            
“What is happening?”

            
“Have they come to aid us?”

            
“We must cross,” Regg said. “Whatever the Hulorn may say.”

            
Following the Mudslide would hook the refugees back in the direction of the Shadowstorm. And mountains blocked them to the north. Their only hope was to cross.

            
Abelar dismounted and approached the Shadovar. The shadows around the shade swirled.

            
“Look behind us, man,” Abelar said, working to keep his voice calm. “These people cannot be caught in that storm. We must get across the river. We are trapped against it. I will answer to the Hulorn for you allowing us passage.”

            
The Shadovar looked past Abelar and into the sky, to the Shadowstorm. When his gaze returned to Abelar, Abelar saw no pity or understanding in it, just darkness.

            
“You have heard my words.”

            
Growing anger put an edge on Abelar’s tone. “My son is in this caravan.”

            
Shadows spun around the Shadovar. “The more pity you.”

            
Day after day of constant tension had drawn Abelar’s emotions taut and they snapped at the Shadovar’s words.  Sudden rage stole his sense and he punched the Shadovar in the face with a gauntleted fist. Bone buckled and the man’s nose exploded blood. He fell to the ground, groaning, shadows whirling. Abelar drew his blade and advanced.

            
“The more pity me, you say? The more pity me?”

            
Ten Shadovar appeared around their fallen commander, blades bare. Arms closed around Abelar from behind, lifted him from the ground, and turned him around. His entire company looked ready to ride the Shadovar down. Trewe’s horse reared. Others whinnied and tossed their heads.

            
“Calm heads!” Regg shouted. It was he who had hold of Abelar. “Calm heads! Think of the refugees!”

            
Regg was right.

            
“All right,” Abelar said to him. “All right.”

            
“All right?” Regg asked.

            
Abelar nodded and Regg set him down and released him. Abelar turned to see the entire Shadovar force had stepped through the shadows and assembled around their commander in a bristling arc of steel. The bald Shadovar rose, and as Abelar watched, his nose stopped bleeding and the broken bones squirmed back into place. The Shadovar sniffed loudly and spit a glob of blood and snot.

            
“Attempt to cross the Mudslide and you all die.”

            T
he shadows engulfed him and his troop and they disappeared into the darkness.

            
Curses made the rounds of the company. Lightning ripped the sky behind them.

            
“Gods damn it,” Abelar said.

           
"What the Hells is going on here?” Regg asked.

 

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[info]avaz74

June 19 2008, 16:27:36 UTC 3 years ago

Sweet

Really can't think of much more to say other than can we bribe WoTC to get this book out sooner? :-)

Abelar's story/journey is the one I am becoming most interested in. Hopefully we'll also get to see a lot of Riven as well.

-Andrew

[info]realmswalker

June 19 2008, 16:59:51 UTC 3 years ago

Abelar just freaking rocks. It takes some series stones to punch a Shade and he has them in abundance.

Good show, Paul, good show.

I can't wait for more of his story.

[info]nehkbet

June 19 2008, 17:37:54 UTC 3 years ago

Abelar rocks!

You have captured the intensity of the moment superbly. Abelar is a perfect reflection of his surroundings, the desire to protect his people, his kin, the flicker of hope, with the darkness swirling about threatening to take hold.

The once a month snippet shall satisfy my hunger for the next installment. Side note, my best friend has finally picked up the first two in the Twilight Wars after I'd been talking her ears off about them and tore through them. She's now bought the EC trilogy and is set to read those in the next month. Yet another Kemp convert I've sacked for the team!

[info]temmogen

June 19 2008, 19:58:23 UTC 3 years ago

Grrrr

Someone at WOTC really needs to release this book sooner than friggin december....

I hate waiting.

Especially for something, that so far, is that good.

Ecellent Paul.

[info]jc_christensen

June 19 2008, 20:41:38 UTC 3 years ago

Oh boy, I'm gonna have to get a signed one of those when it comes out. Thanks for the snippet. My mental tastebuds crave more shadows....and Guinness for my real ones :)

[info]nick_girdner

June 20 2008, 07:25:48 UTC 3 years ago

Nonchalant

Shadows spun around the Shadovar. “The more pity you.”

I like that.

Thanks for giving us addicts our pinch.

[info]jetthomasboat

June 20 2008, 19:43:09 UTC 3 years ago

Abelar rocks! He's probably the coolest paladin I've ever read about.
It amazes me how well you write a bunch of followers of Lathander when we're used to seeing Cale and Riven. It's great stuff. I can't wait for December.

[info]elfinblade1

June 21 2008, 07:52:19 UTC 3 years ago

Rockin!

Awesome. Just awesome. Abelar had some tense and gripping moments in the previous book, and i can`t wait for the conclusion! Looking good Kempo! :)

-Stig-

[info]kurioc

June 21 2008, 21:43:57 UTC 3 years ago

I have to tell you honestly, that at first I didn't like Abelar much, but he grew on me. How he dealt with divided interests pulled me in, the family in jeopardy at both generational ends and all. Though my initial misgivings may have more to do with his introduction coming from Hravens' unpleasant day-the contempt for his shadow, as if it just ain't dark enough. I like her, whatever she is now...will Abelar and her cross paths in ShadowRealm?

[info]thunderstrike37

June 23 2008, 17:10:01 UTC 3 years ago

You just made my day. Not sure how I am going to make it until the next "snippet" comes out.

Keep up the good work.

[info]dork_morrison

June 23 2008, 20:24:49 UTC 3 years ago

I got so engrossed I forgot I was at work lol! Then I was mad there wasn't more to read ;( Can't wait for it.

[info]9341chris

June 26 2008, 12:14:13 UTC 3 years ago

Amazing. I purposely waited to read the first and second book, so that I wouldn't have to wait for the third book. Well I started the first book on June 1st, and I just finished the second book last night.

*sighs*

Anyways, thank you for the snippets! They are a generous offering to us who are feveriously scratching their arms while waiting for the third book.

[info]gregaper

June 28 2008, 15:06:09 UTC 3 years ago

excellent work as usual, Paul. You've very quickly developed Abelar into a character with an immense amount of depth. For me, he has even more potential than Cale as a character because he's a figure that readers can more easily empathize with and in some ways he's more menacing than Cale because his darkness is less indentifiable - both to himself and to others.

a couple of questions:

1) Swordmage was fantastic, but i'm wondering how the decision was reached to bring this book out in hard cover. Unless i'm mistaken, both you and Richard wrote in the War of the Spider Queen series & also had successful trilogies. I'm not saying Swordmage did not deserve to come out in hard cover, only wondering why The Twilight War trilogy did not get the same treatment.

2) How are books that entail events that affect the entire Realms conceptualized & dealt with? Do the editors have ideas with a large scope they want to incorporate or do the authors come to the table with the storylines?

[info]paulskemp

June 30 2008, 13:32:09 UTC 3 years ago

Greg,

A variety of factors contribute to the format (paperback, trade, hardcover) decision. I expect to see some gift sets and different formats in the future. Stay tuned.

I think storylines come about in both ways. Sometimes something out of the games department drives stories (think the Avatar Trilogy) and sometimes an author (perhaps with some input from his/her editor) has a good story idea and they work it into the setting. That's more or less what happened with the Twilight War.

[info]brendan2008

July 12 2008, 09:33:42 UTC 3 years ago

Cale deserves some epic gear! Maybe "headwax of dusky shine" to make the most of the bald 'do...

Hi, hope you enjoyed your holidays

I like my heroes gritty and quick to go for the low-blow, so Cale and Riven are fun to follow. Shades are also dynamic creatures, so I'm a bit disappointed Shar has her joy-sapping fingers snagged into the descendents of Netheril (I support reclaiming of Anauroch without her religious doomsday side plots!) Go Mask! Reclaim those portfolios!

I was just wondering if you're ever tired of people assuming Drizzt would win a pay-per-view exhibition deathmatch against Cale just because
Mr Salvatore is more generous in dishing out fancy magic items to his prime character? After-all Cale is a Shade, a Chosen of Mask, and he'll fight mean and dirty to win - SURELY he'd triumph?? Have you ever discussed this with Rob?
And is there time to slip a random smack-down of such into Shadowrealm?
;)
Please just Cale get some decent +5 leather, maybe a few more prezzies from Mask to put these sorts of lope-sided comparisons to work!

I'm looking forward to see how it turns out, and I must admit it's the big picture with Mask which has interested me the most through all 5 novels. Just noticed the cover art... I hope he saddles up a shadow dragon and flies it back to Stormweather Towers for a hot date with Tazi!

Thanks, and good luck with your other projects.
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